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Jussi Grznar
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ryan hall edmonton 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago Karma: 0
hey everyone, i havent put photo up forever. so here it is. rip it up.

ryan hall bs5050 bs1. found this rail pretty challengin to shoot cause really busy envitonment, let me know what you think.
 
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Re:ryan hall edmonton 5 Months, 2 Weeks ago Karma: 0
Anyone?
 
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Evan Nash
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Re:ryan hall edmonton 5 Months, 2 Weeks ago Karma: 0
i like it overall
the riders bright jacket makes him pop

maybe too loose and busy it takes a moment to find the subject

a slightly tighter crop might help

I like the stuff in the forground for depth but it is a little distracting
 
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reuben krabbe
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Re:ryan hall edmonton 5 Months, 2 Weeks ago Karma: 10
neither the riding nor the photography get me stoked.
it works, but i'm not seeing stuff that make this a memorable photograph
 
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Re:ryan hall edmonton 5 Months, 2 Weeks ago Karma: 0
i feel ya RB i was just tryin to get the most out of whatever was there. the reason i posted the photo is that people might have some ideas, suggestions ... we can ALWAYS do better
 
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